Thursday, September 6, 2012

sam I am

No, please don't repeat it, no I don't hate it, I find it annoying, distasteful, just so unoriginal, no I don't hate my name, it's just the phrase they put it in, give me some thing tasteful a better sounding phrase, I will not garnish any more than a painful smile,and choke out a chuckle, I find the term unremitting, say it only it only once please, I like Sam, just please don't say Sam I am again. there have been more people named Sam, both from religious and celebrity backgrounds, i get the name is from a book but why not choose a different book it's repetitive, annoying, it's like telling me the same exact story, call me something classic, clever, I get tired of this record, can you think of any thing better? why not find my name in a movie, or a book, just don't say Sam i am again it gives me quite a bore sure you can say Sam i am again, it's not that I'm gonna yell, I'd just rather hear something else, your pick, if you ask "Can I call you Sam i am?" I'll just tell you "should not call me that, I don't care what time it's at, or whether you carry a bat, just please don't call me that same old phrase.
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17 comments:

  1. UnknownSeptember 14, 2012 at 5:23 AM

    I love your choice of words. Nice job : )

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  2. India RigginsSeptember 14, 2012 at 5:23 AM

    That was very creative

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  3. UnknownSeptember 14, 2012 at 5:24 AM

    i wish i had your name SAM!! lolll but i loved your poem!! :)

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  4. JadenSeptember 14, 2012 at 5:24 AM

    I liked how you used "Sam I am" as an example thought out the whole poem. I thought it was good (:

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  5. UnknownSeptember 14, 2012 at 5:24 AM

    I love how you made it a little funny at the end., great job Sam!

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  6. UnknownSeptember 14, 2012 at 5:24 AM

    That was really good, buti an understand how you get mad because of the repetition, and I can see how that gets annoying, but your original, you don't have to be Sam I am who like green eggs and ham. You can be Sam who hates ham and likes to eat spam.

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  7. UnknownSeptember 14, 2012 at 5:24 AM

    Great job! I will never call you Sam I am! And I won't carry a bat... As long as you don't eat my parakeets :)

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  8. India RigginsSeptember 14, 2012 at 5:24 AM

    I liked it and I thought it was funny how you said you don't car if they carry a bat :) great job

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  9. juarketsquareSeptember 14, 2012 at 5:24 AM

    Sam,
    I love your writing. The way it is set up almost seems like one constant thought that keeps going and going out of frustration. Can you read it through in one breath?

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  10. AnonymousSeptember 14, 2012 at 5:25 AM

    You rhyme almost every time you write, good job Sam I enjoyed ur writing

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  11. UnknownSeptember 14, 2012 at 5:26 AM

    Why did you make it ryme? Should have been some sad Facebook post about some creepy sory

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  12. Lanae BanksSeptember 14, 2012 at 5:27 AM

    I liked the line(s) where you rhymed, in the style of Dr. Suess. I can only imagine what it is like to be named Sam and constantly having that phrase thrown at me.

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  13. MattieSeptember 14, 2012 at 5:27 AM

    Your poem has a nice rhythm, and the allusions to Green Eggs andHam are clever and amusing.

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